Tuesday, January 10, 2012

Prologue of Eclipse of the night.

This is a first draft and has not been 'edited'. So having said that, there might be grammar and spelling issues, though I think I at least fixed the spelling issues(if there were any).
Feel free to leave any comments if you have any.


A soft thud was heard followed by “Muse... You are not going. Get out of that case.” Kat shook her head as she made her way from the kitchen to the dining room to check on the contents of her mini footlocker. With a roll of bright green eyes at the steel gray fur ball sitting on her camera she sighs as she tries not to laugh at her beloved familiar. “Muse my love, you may be too smart for both our own goods, but I am not taking you with me tonight. Now, shoo! ".
Muse looked her as he cleaned a paw as if she were crazy before nonchalantly getting up and head off towards the living room for more entreating things to do. " He should know by now he isn’t going" she said to herself as she moved her camera into the right spot like she should have before letting her growling stomach distract her. She had been waiting for tonight for some time and could not wait for nightfall to come.
Kat walked over to her desk, grabbing her daybook to retrieve the address to the building. She had never been there and had only heard stories her mother had told her. Nevertheless, she wanted to check them out for herself so she had managed to arrange permission to go investigate the school. Luckily, a close friend and fellow hunter had strings with the powers that be in the school district. Moreover, tonight was the big night. She had been looking forward to this for almost three months.
“Well.” She said to Muse as he brushed her leg. “I’m all set buddy. Mom will be here later to take ya to her place.” She bent down to hug her beloved cat. “I’ll see ya in a few days. Be good. Love ya” she hugged him tight and kissed his fuzzy head before putting him on the desk and grabbing her purse and keys. She then grabbed the case on the dining room table and headed out to her truck.

2 comments:

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  2. ~Dances~ Yay... Thank you. I will do both.

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